1-Mix Academic and Colloquial Styles: 3rd Paragraph

Formal/informal mixings like this can be found in many other texts, most often found in the English department than in the sciences. It's actually even  more often found in journalism. The food industry critic Eric Schlosser explains some changes in Colorado Springs in his top ranked book on fast foods in the United States.

2a- "Of Youth and Age" by Francis Bacon, page 593

In this piece the author uses his poetic skills to tell a story. All the sentences seem to run together, almost making it seem like one big run-on sentence. Allow in this case it works because the author still allows his sentences to flow throughout. Compared to other texts this piece does sound a lot different. It comes off as a never ending story and reminds me of some of the works by Shakespeare. Bacon uses high vocabulary throughout this work which makes it a little challenging to understand exactly what he meant in certain places. The tone is very peaceful and relaxing, by using this type of sentence structure each sentence flows right into the next.

2b-

Once a young girl who had only dreamed. Of such a land where she could be free of all from her past. She spent day in and day out. Trying to find a way to escape from the violence, misery and pain. She needed help when no one was around. The young girl weap through the night and sobbed through the day. Until the day she could shed no more tears.